Thursday, February 4, 2010

# FREEDOM # INSIGHTS OF MY MIND

A LOST SOUL............





Dawn of a beautiful day,
A soul woke up as a LONER
on a familiar bay.

Cheerful smile waved to the ocean,
Who didn't wave back,
Surprised to see the notion,
with aching heart turned his back.............

Walking thru the known route,
did not find any foot-step,
Neither the tree recognized nor the root........

Wondering It's a DREAM,
continued his steps...........

A ray of enlightenment in heart,
knocked the door of his loved ones,
Shocked to see the thwart,
He was their lovable once...........

Retrieved his steps again,
Lonely in the rain.........
Remembered why he liked standing:
"I love walking in rain, as no one would know I'm crying"


His steps followed the path of sick and suffering,
Asked him to retreat from the cubicle,
Reminded, he relieved their pain & kept nurturing,
Couldn't believe this is feasible............

Hope in the heart & with his infelicity,
Friendship Questioned "WHO R U?"
cried I'm not the one with infidelity..........

Music: Life of loner,
Warned not to come closer,
Books, his best companion,
closed themselves with this union............
Is he so inept?
Tears in eyes, lose of hope,
once again he retraced his path,
realized it's not a DREAM............

Face to the moonlit ocean,
Lonely under the sky,
shouted "He is not fatuous.
Not the one to be pernicious"

He is A Child, A Healer, A friend, A Music Lover, A Reader...........
Always recited "They would forget what you have said,
but won't forget how u made them feel"
WAS HE ALWAYS BEING SELFISH?????

Wished his relationship with this world
to be cherished,
Couldn't believe so soon it perished..........

Still hoping for the Incandescence,
But For now,
HE WAS A LOST HUMAN SOUL...............

3 comments:

Blood Is Red said...

..... could'nt find the right words
But,it can't stop me from commenting here!!!

The way u described a lost soul is amazing:)

Love this line...Cheerful smile waved to the ocean,Who didn't wave back

Very nice

Beyond Horizon said...

Thanks Blood Is Red!

This is something very close to me :)

manshaa said...

Amazing how the feeling of loneliness lingers in the verse from beginning to the end :'(