I don't want my love to break you,
I don't want my love to hurt you,
I don't want my love to flow in your words,
I don't want my love to be your pain,
I don't want my love to be in your shadow,
For you to be a reminder of me
I want my love to give you strength,
To live away from me,
To never give up on love and life,
For if you do give up,
I will lose the one who was never meant for me,
I will lose who wasn't made for me
©Beyond Horizon
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The poem is so powerful and filled with emotion! Love is simple, but it is we who make it complicated!
ReplyDeleteOur expectations make it complicated. Thank you Keerthi.
DeleteAs simple as love sounds, there are also a few complications it carries. The power is in finding the true value of it. Good one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jayanthy, you said it well.
DeleteBeautiful expressions via these lines! How better love could be described. Simply loved it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Surabhi.
DeleteAh.. self less love. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteIts too difficult, but that's how it should be. Thank you Mahathi.
DeleteGreat poem. One can't describe breaking up in a better way. You have put your heart in it and it touches readers heart straight away.
ReplyDeleteNo, No, it isn't about breaking up at all Paresh. It is about two souls of despite loving each other cannot be together. Thank you.
Deletelove is beautiful and you have defined it in so many words. nicely written
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DeleteVery well penned. Love is not just about getting but also about giving and being selfless.
ReplyDeleteYes. Thank you Neha
DeleteLove can give all the strength of the world
ReplyDeleteQuite true. Thank you.
DeleteSo well penned. You bought out the self less emotions that one goes through when in love.
ReplyDeleteThank you for saying it Sudha.
DeleteLove is pure and is beautiful. Lovely lines yu have written here.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tina.
DeleteSuch true love is hard to find especially in today's materialistic and selfish world, I wonder how many would love unconditionally
ReplyDeleteNot many, sadly. Thank you Akshata.
DeleteYour writing is so beautiful and yet powerful at the same time. Loved the description of "love".
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tamanna.
DeleteHow beautiful and powerful this poetry is!
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DeleteWhat a beautifully written post <3
ReplyDeleteLove is always pure and true, just loved the way you written about the true meaning of love
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DeleteLoved the words here!
ReplyDelete"I want my love to give you strength"...true love, indeed!
Thank you Shilpa.
DeleteBeautiful poem
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DeleteSo So Beautiful the poem is. Loved It. Love is one pure emotion, it transform souls. Superb!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Tina.
DeleteAmazing lines..decribed love so wonderfully. #Surbhireads
ReplyDeleteThank you Surbhi
DeleteGem of a poem and narrating pain, longing and love in an intense manner.
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Thank you Nayantara.
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