Scar
Remembrance
Of broken promise
Promise?
No! It wasn’t
It was keeping a word
Word
She believed
Blind faith?
Remember ‘No one else?’
She did hide
But never lied
Breeze across the seven seas
Slashed her within
Hour glass shattered
Grains of sand
Spilled around
Their voices
Deafening
It’s End of
Months long wait
Walked away
As if never came her way
Mending her heart?
She did not give
wasn’t fallen for
But she was on the verge of
Half drawn heart
On her breathe
Stay Incomplete
She is no longer waiting
She will not!
I won’t let her to!
Scar
She won’t hide
Reminiscence Screaming of
Don’t Trust Easily!
P.S. This time I haven't attached any song. Why not you suggest one..Let me know your favorite :)
trust is a rare phenomenon now.. well written, reflects the inner pain
ReplyDeletetouching and soulful!
ReplyDeleteso much said in too few a lines..nicely written
Following you straightway.
And hmm....privileged to your 100th follower.Congrats and keep sharing.looking to read more from you.
ReplyDelete"Scar
ReplyDeleteShe won’t hide
Reminiscence of
Don’t Trust Easily!"
Excellent way to end this great writing! It brings home the message of us needing something to remind us of how we were hurt . . . without this, history may keep repeating itself.
I feel cheated ~ no song :P :D
How insightful....
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ReplyDeleteNo Doubt about it. Can't let self burn often.
Thanks :)
@Rohit
Thank you :)
@Fiona
Ah! Why no song :( :P
Thank you :)
@Swati
Thank you :)
soulful i would say..:)
ReplyDelete@Subtle Yet Outlandish
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I suggest you the song Someday you will be loved by Death cab for cutie :) :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
@Tanvi
ReplyDeleteThank you once again for the song :D