Friday, November 18, 2011

Heal My Wounds


Yearning died
Voice muffled


Talks, annoys
Closeness, vexes


Words, those words
Torments


Silence, stings
Tear me apart
Wait!
I can't feel it


I hate that reflection
Truth or Lie?
Happy or Compromise?


Eyes deceives
My own reflection
Betrays me


Those tears, unyielding I see
Stubborn, adamant
Soulless,Heartless
I remain


Weary of this mask
Lost, I am


Screaming silence
Shatters the mirror
Melting eyes, haunts


Sardonic, My smile
Cynical, My laugh


Cold as a stone


I would rather be hurt
than feel no pain
I would rather be hurt
than feel no pain


P.S. I know after exactly 2 months this Beyond Horizon has arisen. The storm had taken its toll inside, so I had to calm it, and whats better place than this, My Abode...My Solace :D

As for the post, read it with the thought as someone says "momentary emotions" ;)

I hope to arise again soon.

Immerse yourself in this lovely tune by Poets Of The Fall-  Beautiful Ones



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32 comments:

  1. Swati ThampanNovember 18, 2011 at 11:49 PM

    I would rather be hurt than feel no pain! what a lovely thought!!!

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  2. Eon HeathNovember 19, 2011 at 2:22 AM

    i always believed that the fewer teh words, teh stronger are the emotions...your poem just re affirmed my belief...
    :)
    naice...


    Regards,
    Dumbhead...

    p.s. - write only when you feel like, it doesnt matter if its 2 months or 2 days...just let it happen...
    :)

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  3. --November 19, 2011 at 2:55 AM

    I'm so glad you have arisen to share this beautiful, moving poem with us :)

    "I would rather be hurt
    than feel no pain
    I would rather be hurt
    than feel no pain"

    This thought/line is brilliant and I'm glad you chose to echo it :) It is so true and I experienced a time in my life when my 'gear' was stuck in 'neutral'. I thought it was a safe, good place to 'ride' through life but it wasn't, because I missed out on feeling EMOTIONS ~ without emotions, we are dead inside ...

    P.S. ~ I'm really enjoying this gorgeous song! Thanks for introducing me to it :) The image is also stunning and very apt!

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  4. the other side of meNovember 19, 2011 at 4:35 AM

    Beyond horizon is back!!!

    Painful lines..yet it captivates..

    Weary of this mask
    Lost, I am

    I would rather be hurt
    than feel no pain

    A sense of relatedness,maybe

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  5. Gargi GuptaNovember 19, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    Welcome back....loved your poem...I know you would rather be hurt than feel no pain :) Still hope you get away with the pain soon...take care

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  6. Alka GurhaNovember 19, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    The power of brevity...beautiful.

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  7. Prateek BagriNovember 19, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Whoa.
    Never thought sometimes pain can pove to be a necessity.

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  8. Sarah malikNovember 19, 2011 at 1:55 PM

    Not all hurts bring pain in an imaginable, perceptible way!
    sometimes being cold and numb is also a kind of pain...and believe me, take it in ur stride and turn it into a positive force to make u strong and not let it break u.
    and the poem is beautiful indeed, fewer the words..greater the impact :)


    sarah

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  9. BeyondNovember 20, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    pain.. it teaches a lot. But hope it becomes a beautiful memory soon rather than a painful present. Take care.

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  10. SimranNovember 20, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    So deep and touching ..
    I liked the selection of your words :)
    Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem and song :)

    Keep :)
    Love you.

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  11. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺November 20, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    That was awesome!
    gr8 lines :)

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  12. TanviNovember 20, 2011 at 6:22 PM

    Poonam those are not mere words, I can sense all the pain, the retaliation, the acceptance...its beautifully penned :) :) Take care and Yes I agree with Harsh :)

    Cheers,

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  13. Susie ClevengerNovember 21, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    So poignant...the ability to share something so personal...shows you can/will rise again...

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  14. pandian chelliahNovember 21, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    I would rather be hurt
    than feel no pain

    awesome....between words that torment and the silence that stings, its the pain of your poem that wins

    keep writing :)

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  15. UnknownNovember 21, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    Welcome back girl! :)
    Everyone around here seem to love tho lines, I would rather be hurt than feel no pain, I adore them too but the words that stirred me more were,
    Eyes deceives me
    My own reflection
    Betrays me.
    And
    Sardonic, my smile
    Cynical, my laugh.
    There's a deep haunting behind those words. :)

    Love, ~Moonlight~ :)

    P.S: The song, a beautiful one!

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  16. KunalNovember 21, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    A haunting poem Beyond Horizon.


    Sad. Painful. Contradictions. Emotions. Life. Beautiful :)

    For now, let the sardonic smile and cynical laugh drop dead and smile and laugh from within.

    Hurt and Pain have to come anyway. Make merry while they are in transit! :P

    Best Wishes

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  17. :-DeeNovember 21, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Momentary is fineeee. Phoenix! Nice post.

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  18. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    @Swati
    Am on top of the world to read your words on my post. Thank you :)

    @Eon Heath
    Coming that from you, means a biiiggg compliment :D

    Yup! I do remember what you said in P.S. before and I will...Thanks Dumbhead :)

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  19. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 8:59 PM

    @Fiona
    We can never live without emotions.

    Thank you :)

    And you always gonna go with a gorgeous tune from here ;)


    @My sweet Lazy dumb friend
    Thank you :)

    I will keep coming back ;)

    A sense of relatedness, hmm...I would always wish that you never have to go through the emotions mentioned. Keep Smiling :)

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  20. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    @Gargi
    Ahh! Thanks ;)


    @Alka
    Brevity...I don't know really.
    Thanks :)

    @Prateek
    Yup! When you come to know how stubborn you have become in a wrong way.
    Thank you :)

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  21. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 9:04 PM

    @Sarah
    Nicely said subtlescribbler :D
    Thank you :)


    @Beyond
    Thank you, thats all I can say to you :)


    @Simran
    Thank you :)

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  22. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    @Valli
    Thank you :)


    @Tanvi
    You got it right, cute one. Thank you :)


    @Susie
    What should I say
    Humbled, a lot! :)

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  23. Beyond HorizonNovember 24, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    @Pandian
    Liked what you said that rhymed. Thank you :)


    @Moonlight
    Haunting?! Probably that's what I had intended to ;)
    The song, hmm, the haunting had to end with the beautiful ones :D
    Thank you :)


    @Kunal
    *smiles & laughs*
    Yes yes, merry as they are still in transit :P
    Thanks :)


    @Dee
    Thank you smiley one :)
    Phoenix! I love it ;)

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  24. Janet MartinNovember 25, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    This is very emotional, but faith will bring you through...faith in the One who sees the big picture while we capture moments...hang in there and go with God!

    'I will never leave or forsake you' Heb. 13:5

    Love, Janet

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  25. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/November 26, 2011 at 3:11 PM

    mesmerizing poem

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  26. LilangelNovember 28, 2011 at 2:20 AM

    @Poonam Welcome back :) Loved the poem and few of the lines already quoted by many of your readers...Keep writing whenever you feel like...I guess thats what makes it beautiful :)

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  27. Alka GurhaNovember 30, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    A doc with such lovely thoughts...I hope u remain the same.I have seen docs becoming emotionless, cold and stone hearted only because it is difficult to carry the burden of emotions of their patients.

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  28. Beyond HorizonNovember 30, 2011 at 8:04 PM

    @Janet
    Faith, yes definitely. But the One who sees the picture sometimes takes an exam of our patience, that I fear it might break.

    Thanks for the kindness :)

    @Rohit
    Thanks!

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  29. Beyond HorizonNovember 30, 2011 at 8:12 PM

    @Lilangel
    I missed you too over here...Thank you :)


    @Alka
    Very kind of you..Humbled :D

    I have learnt not to sympathize or empathize when in front of patient, cause its important to evoke that pain to know the disorder prevailing (physical pain)

    My so far experience has shown me that a few kind words to patients actually reduces their ailments. A stranger confiding to a doc, and knowing their emotional pain and what they are going through...I can't explain my thoughts over it in words.

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  30. ShreyaDecember 1, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    Nice words :)

    http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

    P.S. My first visit here, nice blog :)

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  31. CяystalDecember 6, 2011 at 12:08 PM

    *I would rather be hurt
    than feel no pain
    I just wish the pain came in forms more subtle rather than in such garish forms.
    Faith brings us out of these things- It tough to live by it but ultimately, the journey is worth it.

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  32. Beyond HorizonDecember 22, 2011 at 3:56 PM

    @Shreya
    Thanks :)


    @Crystal
    Thanks for the wish..Yup need to feel it often :)

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