Forsaken in crowd,
Wandering lonely as a cloud.
Emotions being thrust,
But
The cloud will never burst.
Emptiness, have no fear,
Am alive, Its dear.
Engulfs my whine,
Eyes, have no brine.
Darkness, my solace,
Silence, I embrace.
Midst of deserted,
It still can be quoted,
"Life is Beautiful"
It indeed is Beautiful...
Isn't it?
The poem is lovely, depicts a loner's view of life I feel. It's a phase that one goes through, one returns to it at times willingly; eventually one can start loving it too...
ReplyDeleteNice one!! :-)
beautiful pic and abs lovely poem!
ReplyDeletefollowing your blog!
The poem makes you speechless. Beautiful...
ReplyDeleteLife is beautiful and so is your poem.
ReplyDeleteIndeed.
ReplyDeleteLife IS beautiful despite of all its nuisances. But I guess, the little troubles only help us admire the rest of the fun part, isn't it?
:)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
lovely poem
ReplyDeleteamazin lines...true we crib so much abt life but we need to remember happiness too is a gift of this life...:)...lovely last verse...
ReplyDeleteMidst of deserted,
It still can be quoted,
"Life is Beautiful"
It indeed is Beautiful...
awesome...:)
Indeed life is beautiful ,so let's live to the fullest and be men for others..let's leave a trail in the path which we've pass.
ReplyDeletelife is as beautiful as the flow in your poetry.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem dear :)
ReplyDeleteLIFE IS BEAUTIFUL AS YOU AND YOUR THOUGHTS! :)
Liked rhyming you made :D
keep expressing!
Wow..Yes from this i would surely say life is beautiful!..I am just so lost in your words :)
ReplyDeleteP.S.-Will make up for the other posts not read asap..!..missed your blog!
Darkness, my solace,
ReplyDeleteSilence, I embrace.
Loved these simple lines...:)
Nice write :)
Hey Poonam.doc,
ReplyDeleteam late, aint i??
:)
Life is indeed beautiful....after all the disappointment n pain we still believe it to be...thats hope n content...its good...someone once told me, "scars redefine beauty" may be it rings true for life too....the scars make it more beautiful...
Regards,
a dumbhead...
:P
@manshaa
ReplyDeleteYou have always understood the hidden feeling behind my words.As I had told you this was not I had wanted to write, but couldn't help it.
:)
@Raam Pyari
Welcome here and Thank you :)
@Saru
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
@Alka
Thank you, your sweet words always makes me smile :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
ReplyDeleteYes, said it right. Thank you :)
@sm
Thank you :)
@vaisakhi: well cribbing is a part of life, but we do not have to forget the wonderful side of Life too
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
@Angel: Nicely said :)
@Dr.Pratibha: Missed you a lot...Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Simran: Thank you for the lovely comment :)
@Alcina: happy happy that it made you say so :)
and No problem, miss you too
@Valli: Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Eon: That someone must be truly wise and beautiful, coz very few can say that "scars redefine beauty" :)
Early or late, I WANT YOUR COMMENT even if you stand on a landmine :P
:)
Beautiful lines..Lonely yet lovely :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the richness of your words. They are simple yet so deep in themselves. Life's beautiful, Indeed!
ReplyDelete@Lilangel
ReplyDeleteI Love the loneliness sometimes, thanks :)
@Risha
Thanks a lot :)
Life is beautiful and so are your words..
ReplyDelete@Susie
ReplyDeleteThank you :), & sorry for am late to reply