Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Zestful in Desolation...


Forsaken in crowd,
Wandering lonely as a cloud.
Emotions being thrust,
But 
The cloud will never burst.

Emptiness, have no fear,
Am alive, Its dear.
Engulfs my whine,
Eyes, have no brine.

Darkness, my solace,
Silence, I embrace.

Midst of deserted,
It still can be quoted,
"Life is Beautiful"
It indeed is Beautiful...

Isn't it?



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24 comments:

  1. Vijeta BiradarJuly 26, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    The poem is lovely, depicts a loner's view of life I feel. It's a phase that one goes through, one returns to it at times willingly; eventually one can start loving it too...

    Nice one!! :-)

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  2. RJuly 27, 2011 at 2:15 AM

    beautiful pic and abs lovely poem!

    following your blog!

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  3. Saru SinghalJuly 27, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    The poem makes you speechless. Beautiful...

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  4. Alka GurhaJuly 27, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    Life is beautiful and so is your poem.

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  5. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 27, 2011 at 2:27 PM

    Indeed.
    Life IS beautiful despite of all its nuisances. But I guess, the little troubles only help us admire the rest of the fun part, isn't it?

    :)
    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. SMJuly 27, 2011 at 7:17 PM

    lovely poem

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  7. VaisakhiJuly 27, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    amazin lines...true we crib so much abt life but we need to remember happiness too is a gift of this life...:)...lovely last verse...
    Midst of deserted,
    It still can be quoted,
    "Life is Beautiful"
    It indeed is Beautiful...
    awesome...:)

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  8. AngelJuly 28, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Indeed life is beautiful ,so let's live to the fullest and be men for others..let's leave a trail in the path which we've pass.

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  9. Dr. Pratibha SinghJuly 28, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    life is as beautiful as the flow in your poetry.

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  10. SimranJuly 28, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    Beautiful poem dear :)
    LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL AS YOU AND YOUR THOUGHTS! :)
    Liked rhyming you made :D

    keep expressing!

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  11. AlcinaJuly 29, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    Wow..Yes from this i would surely say life is beautiful!..I am just so lost in your words :)

    P.S.-Will make up for the other posts not read asap..!..missed your blog!

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  12. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺July 29, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    Darkness, my solace,
    Silence, I embrace.

    Loved these simple lines...:)

    Nice write :)

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  13. Eon HeathJuly 29, 2011 at 7:11 PM

    Hey Poonam.doc,
    am late, aint i??
    :)

    Life is indeed beautiful....after all the disappointment n pain we still believe it to be...thats hope n content...its good...someone once told me, "scars redefine beauty" may be it rings true for life too....the scars make it more beautiful...


    Regards,
    a dumbhead...
    :P

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  14. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:02 PM

    @manshaa

    You have always understood the hidden feeling behind my words.As I had told you this was not I had wanted to write, but couldn't help it.

    :)

    @Raam Pyari

    Welcome here and Thank you :)

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  15. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:03 PM

    @Saru

    Thank you :)

    @Alka

    Thank you, your sweet words always makes me smile :)

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  16. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:05 PM

    @Blasphemous Aesthete

    Yes, said it right. Thank you :)


    @sm

    Thank you :)

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  17. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    @vaisakhi: well cribbing is a part of life, but we do not have to forget the wonderful side of Life too

    Thank you :)

    @Angel: Nicely said :)

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  18. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    @Dr.Pratibha: Missed you a lot...Thank you :)

    @Simran: Thank you for the lovely comment :)


    @Alcina: happy happy that it made you say so :)

    and No problem, miss you too

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  19. Beyond HorizonAugust 2, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    @Valli: Thank you :)


    @Eon: That someone must be truly wise and beautiful, coz very few can say that "scars redefine beauty" :)

    Early or late, I WANT YOUR COMMENT even if you stand on a landmine :P

    :)

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  20. LilangelAugust 10, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    Beautiful lines..Lonely yet lovely :)

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  21. UnknownAugust 12, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    I loved the richness of your words. They are simple yet so deep in themselves. Life's beautiful, Indeed!

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  22. Beyond HorizonAugust 16, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    @Lilangel

    I Love the loneliness sometimes, thanks :)

    @Risha

    Thanks a lot :)

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  23. Susie ClevengerDecember 8, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Life is beautiful and so are your words..

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  24. Beyond HorizonDecember 22, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    @Susie
    Thank you :), & sorry for am late to reply

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