Whether I keep my eyes,
open or close,
I see nothing,
but
Darkness
Groping in dark,
I fear losing myself...
My only treasure,
Has being stolen...
How could I not protect it?
Why did they leave me?
What is left?
Is
Only the feeling of
Bereft...
Confined in dark,
I am trying to annihilate...
Ferreting out,
Standing on edge of the cliff,
I still cannot see anything,
But
I want to fly...
Words...
My Wings,
Once
I soared,
among other birds
elegantly...
Reverance for words,
Words...taken away from me,
since long...
I need my wings,
or
I shall soar down,
Towards
My End.
P.S. I don't know why,I feel its incomplete...
creatively expressed and well entwined !!!
ReplyDeleteloved it.
Lovely!
ReplyDeletePerhaps the feeling of incompleteness made your verses complete.
i cannot comment but feel the incompleteness myself, probably not in words though...
ReplyDeletesounds like a deep loss, nicely put forward
Hey I liked the different words you use to express that u feel incomplete, and the pic is just wonderful... :)
ReplyDeleteIt is incomplete may be because the soaring words are yet to join and create the magical bridge of hope once again :)..like in the dark night does the firefly :)..wonderful piece!
ReplyDeleteI have something for you to take up > Here
Hey, Hi
ReplyDeletethe incompleteness is there. its right in front of you. but, incomplete it is not in words...but the thought....it fails to quench the desire to let out everything thats inside...
:)
nice.
:P
Regards,
Eon Heath
Hey don't feel down, sometimes the words just fail us, and yet, the inability itself speaks a lot.
ReplyDeleteNice read. And who would complete it if you were to term it as incomplete? :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
The expression is evident...
ReplyDeleteLovely, as always.
Inventive Indeed :)
ReplyDeleteI wish you soar higher and higher..
Loved your blog's theme
Take care!
Love you :)
Nice one :)
ReplyDelete@Jyoti Mishra...Welcome here & Thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Prateek...Probably yes, its still inside...Thank you :)
@Beyond...yes the feeling of incomplete is still lurking, I did try to pen it down
Thank you :)
@manshaa...Hey Thanks a lot :)
@Alcina...like in the dark night does the firefly...Hmm...Nice
Thank you for the tag too :)
Lets see when can I take it...
@Eon...Deciphered my incompleteness :P
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete...Hey Thanks...am good now :)
Waiting for someone or something to complete it ;)
@Alka...Thanks for always being here :)
@Simran...Love you too dear
Thanks :)
@Blossom...Thanks :)
Sometimes..its the incompleteness that completes you...though there is mist and a sense of loss nothing is lost...it does come back!
ReplyDeleteMaybe in a surprise package :)
Nice read...
Take Care.
This post seems have loneliness felt by the writer. Amazing as if i can also feel the pain . Cheers ...
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written...it definitely pulls a string in the heart while reading it..!
ReplyDeletelovely lines!!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading it..
hey nicely written..sorry for coming so late :/
ReplyDeleteDont you noe,sometimes incompleteness leads to perfection:)
Cheer up dear:)
First reaction ... beautiful... worth the wait... but hey my comment too is incomplete ... I'll come again... I want to say so much more..... a little caught up... and could not pass by without a word too
ReplyDeleteTake care dear... love you
@Fatima...Hmm surprise package...am waiting then...Thanks a lot :)
ReplyDelete@Angel...What more can I wish for if you could feel the emotions after reading...Thanks :)
@Lilangel...Thanks for the lovely comment :)
@Sorcerer...am glad...Thanks a lot :)
@My sweet Little Friend...Please don't say sorry...I always wait for you here...
Yes, sometimes :)
@RM...Hey RM...Firstly I need to Thank you too...because of you I could pen down these words...and I am awaiting for your comment
Thanks dear...Love you too :)
Words are my destiny and my only solace,
ReplyDeleteThey give life to me and a poetic face!
I really understand what you feel here because i guess i feel quite the same! For some people when everything ceases to work..Words matter the most! You conveyed the thought in a really wonderful way!
Loved it!