Wednesday, January 5, 2011

INCEPTION...

personal growth

I stumbled,
I felled,
I rose,
I flied...

The blues,
The adieus,
The azure,
The furore...

Away from a feign-er,
Away from a faker...

A gazer,
A bit flatterer...

Grisly,
Ghastly,
Sometimes woebegone,
Sometimes forlorn...

I am affable,
I am amiable...

Smarten,
Smitten,
Infatuation,
Fascination...

Search for self,
Not so easy,
To know thyself...
 But
Unremitting assiduous,
Ceaselessly pertinacious...

An Enlightened Journey,
I am walking,
Learning,
Thriving,
Expressing!!!

New Perception,
It's the
INCEPTION...


I end this post but begin this wonderful awesome Journey ahead with my Favorite Anne Franks words from The Diary Of A Young Girl, "I want to go on living even after my death! And therefore I am grateful to God for giving me this gift, this possibility of developing myself and of writing, of expressing all that is in me."

27 comments:

  1. nice words these are:)..never give up your try to know thyself:)...beautiful and sensible writing is an art...never give up that too:)

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  2. Hello Poonam, Nice poem. Good luck.
    Also, i like the new look of the site. It is perfect for the kind of words you post. Good stuff.

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  3. Like the linkings you have done over here..

    and remember a line after reading the excerpt from The diary of Anne frank i.e.

    Drive my dead thoughts over the universe
    Like withered leaves to quicken a new birth!
    And, by the incantation of this verse,

    Scatter, as from an unextinguished hearth
    Ashes and sparks, my words among mankind!
    Be through my lips to unawakened Earth

    -By Percy byshe shelly

    Keep on expressing :)

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  4. @Raksha... You too have that beautiful art... Thanks :)

    @Always Happy... I try that the layout reflects the emotions of my words too... Thanks a lot :)

    @Alcina... Wow your reply has made it more beautiful... Thank you :)

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  5. it is good that the journey is enlightening.. you have wisdom and character that speaks in your writeups

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  6. nice collection of words, impressv wrk wit all ur dreams confiscated in dat..applaud :)

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  7. a long journey of ups and downs, and in the end, birth of an idea, inception.

    Nice.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  8. @magiceye...YES!!!
    Thanks :)

    @Beyond...That s a Big and pleasant appreciative words...Thank you so much :)

    @vineet...Humble Bows :)
    Thanks!!!

    @Dr.Pratibha...Thank You :)

    @Blasphemous Aesthete...Yes a long Journey...of different colors of joy and sorrow...

    Thanks a lot :)

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  9. very well composed....said a lot using very few words... beautifully penned poem.


    http://irfanurs.blogspot.com

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  10. Beautiful poem. The words are just floating.

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  11. Some feelings, we all go through. At times, having these perceptions as inceptions might disturb the dreams, but as long as you are in control, live on :)

    Liked your this way of expressing, though silent yet again..

    PS - I like Eric Clapton's song. Good to hear some music in here, adds on the words :)

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  12. @IRFANUDDIN... Glad you liked my few words Thanks :)

    @Rajesh... Thank you :)

    @Sourav... Yes I know it might...thats what I said it in first stanza...stumbled...felled...but rose and I will always... Someday fly too...

    Thank you so much... Love to be Silent as long as it is understandable and loved :)

    P.S. I Love Eric Clapton songs... My favorite "WONDERFUL TONIGHT"... Heart-Touching :)

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  13. that one was one artistic piece. use of perfect words at perfect places makes it all a perfect piece, i would a get a lot to learn from ur work..
    great.

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  14. @Deepika...artistic piece...WOW...Never thought someone would say that...Thank you so much...Your writings are awesome and very innovative :)

    @Sushant Jain... Thanks!

    @Matangi Mawley... Thanks a lot :)

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  15. New look is nice...and your words are sometimes compelling, sometimes searching, sometimes revealing but always fascinating .. ..

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  16. Wow!That's super awesome.I'm a poem freak n I love it a lot.
    Cheers
    Vishal

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  17. @Alka...quite fascinatingly awesome comment...Thank you so much :)

    @vishalbheeroo...Thanks!!!

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  18. Lovely words... really like the way u ended it... keep them coming!

    Cheers!
    Tavish

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  19. @Tavish...Glad you liked it... Thank you so much :)

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  20. Beautiful words...loved the flow !

    And the ending note from Anne Frank was apt!

    Liked the entire poem, though it sounded more like a verse.

    Take Care,
    Fatima

    P.S: hey do visit my blog too if at all you wish too....

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  21. innovative?.. now never thought someone would say that.. and yes u inspire

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  22. What a profound subect to pen down about .... I loved that book .... I was awestruck by that book thinking about how very unsually profound thoughts a young girl had .... So much she could have been ..... so much she already was ...
    and your write - up : Complete & Perfect ... :)

    P.S. : Please do write more, its a treat to read your thoughts :)

    Love
    Ritz..
    www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com

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  23. @Fatima..Thanks :)

    @Deepika...Yes you are dear and Thanks too:)

    @Ritz...She had indeed profound thought, far more mature and strong too, and her words were her Strength!

    Thanks a lot, Its pleasure to read your writings and I so very much miss your comments too :)

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