Wednesday, September 1, 2010

PURSUIT OF FREEDOM.......

Darkness creeping in My Life,
Engulfing My Soul with its figure-less hands.....

I'm NOT the most HONEST,
I WON'T say I HAVE NEVER LIED.......

But,
DON'T FORCE ME doing things,
I DETEST, I LOATHE,
I won't be able to do them,
I WOULD NEVER!!!

It suffocates me,
Its KILLING my Conscience,
Its SOUL-ERODING.......

I'm NOT IMPRISON,
Yet I'm NOT FREE......

Saw My SHADOW in this darkness,
Someone said,
#"Never FEAR SHADOWS.
They simply means there's
a LIGHT SHINING
SOMEWHERE NEARBY"

Captured in this net,
I'll NEVER FALL APART!!!

Light of HOPE,
SPARK of Faith,
I'll COMBAT,
I'll STRIVE,
I'll BLOW AWAY THE DARKNESS,

& Let the LIGHT of FREEDOM SHINE in MY LIFE.......

#QUOTE BY RUTH RENKEL

18 comments:

Ritz.. said...

Saw My SHADOW in this darkness,
Someone said,
"Never FEAR SHADOWS.
They simply means there's
a LIGHT SHINING
SOMEWHERE NEARBY

Beautiful Lines ... What I can read in your post is the mode of survival ... for surviving we had to mold ourselves and become someone we loathe... But with time that turns into manipulation and you just manipulate yourself and your words according to the situation once this frustration and suffocation ends ... and manipulation starts it gets easier to handle .. :)... Been There ... Done that..

Cheers
Ritz..
www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com

Mahesh Kalaal said...

a wonderful positive affirmation being in a imposed darkness...
apt usage of simple words :)

R said...

A salute to the spirit

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

"They say, that I must learn to kill before I can feel safe,
But I, I'd rather kill myself than turn into their say.

Sometimes, I feel like going down and so disconnected,
somehow, I know that I am haunted to be wanted."

No, I didn't Rasmus said those lines, am just quoting them after having read your lines and finding a co-relation. :)

Nice optimism.

Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete

Rashmi M said...

Freedom should be reached within first :)


And..... your page looks awesome

Rashmi M said...

And yes..... your words are beautiful..... made me feel positive.... I love it now...after reading it again

Beyond Horizon said...

@Ritz...NEVER fear shadows...is well quoted by Ruth Renkel...i hve just adopted it...rest of d expressions r frm my heart...just wrote wat m goin thru rite now

n yes rightly said..."and manipulation starts it gets easier to handle"

@Mahesh Kalaal...thnks...dis simple words hve let my heart 2 vent out my emotions

@Rajat....thank u :)

@Blasphemous Aesthete...d song creates a gr8 impact...thanks

@Rashmi M....Thank u...it feels nice wen my expressions hve an impact on its readers...along wid venting out my emotions :)

ROFO said...

At the end of every dark tunnel, there's always an exit, a way out of darkness and into light and freedom.

http://lovers-shore.blogspot.com

Saumya said...

I'll COMBAT,
I'll STRIVE,
I'll BLOW AWAY THE DARKNESS,

& Let the LIGHT of FREEDOM SHINE in MY LIFE.......

great inspiring lines....

Lauren Elizabeth said...

all of this was so inspiring. I loved it. the photos as well are amazing!!

xoxox

Komal Ali said...

Nice layout. :)
Lovely post.

Beyond Horizon said...

@ROFO....ders alwys an exit

@Saumya, Lauren Elizabeth,Komal Ali.... Thank U :)

Chandrika Shubham said...

I liked the last para. :)
Full of optimism. :)

writerzblock said...

I've recently come across a lot of youngsters writing heavy stuff... I mean, deep and strong emotions running through their work.. like this one... and it makes me feel a little scared... why has the world turned into such a bad place?!

Liked the positive ending to your poem.
Cheers...
Pallavi

umapoems said...

Light of HOPE,
SPARK of Faith,
I'll COMBAT,
I'll STRIVE

such beautiful words ..loved your poem :)

+ve n -ve of the phones and a girl's life
http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=34845

Romeo Das said...

Beautifully written! :)I liked the optimism!

Hope you like my post too!
When love calls

Take care! happy blogging :)

Beyond Horizon said...

@writerzblock...world hasnt bcum a bad place...just d circumstances r changed a lot...dats why such strong emotions....& Thank u!

@umapoems....Thank u!

@Romeo Das...Thank u 4 likin d optimism :)

Malvika said...

Nice, I could feel the suffocation, and more since right now I am going through a tough time related to freedom.

You are right being a girl if I have to kill, I will,
but i will not surrender.
And I hope no woman does.

That freedom is a right - is a notion,
That freedom is yours - is idealistic,
That freedom is what you are living - is choice.

I sincerely hope you choose it every minute.